雅思写作2：这样的开头句才可以让人眼前一亮

上一节课中，老师和大家吐槽了一下 'With the development of society' 这种看似万金油，实则是敌敌畏的开头句。没有看过这篇文章的同学们可以在博客中找到这篇文章。那么这节课，老师就和大家探讨一下什么样的开头句可以让人眼前一亮。

学过雅思的同学们都知道，大作文的开头句一般以改写题目为主。有些同学基本照抄题目；也有的同学开始自编自造，不仅出现了很多语法错误，更有甚者把题目的问题都改了。如果考官考到了以上两种情况，就会惯性地认为你的词汇量很低，或者语法很差。

“闪亮瞎”句型

Whether__has triggered an intense controversy. ( in the realm of __)
是否__已经在（__的领域）引起了轩然大波。

例题A

Some people say that in spite of technological developments (e.g. Internet), books will always be an important source of information. Do you agree or disagree?

改写A

Whether books will remain a crucial source of information given that the modern technology such as Internet is developing exponentially has triggered an intense controversy.

例题B

Some say that team sports are good for children to prepare working life. Others disagree.
Discuss two views and give your opinion.

改写B

Whether or not team sports are beneficial, if not highly necessary, for kids to prepare for working life in the near future has triggered an intense controversy (in the realm of self-development.)

例题C

Some people think that tourists can learn very much about a place they are visiting on holiday while others think they cannot. Describe both these views and give your own opinion.

改写C

Whether tourists are able to draw a crystal clear picture about the attributes of the destination that they are visiting on vacation has triggered an intense controversy.

这一次，老师讲解了一个“闪亮瞎”的句型和3个对应的改写例句。Whether__has triggered an intense controversy ( in the realm of __). 希望大家可以灵活的运用这个开头句，摒弃上一篇干货所提到的病句 ‘With the development of society’ 。